My Christmas Vacations
Capitalization Rules
Well the first day that I went out of the school Colegio Granadino I went to a restaurant cold Wings with my friends Juan Diego, Daniel and Alvaro. After that I went to a nursing home; I went there with my friends Juan Sebastian, Sofia C, Salome, Maria Jose C, Antonia C, and other friends and brothers of them. Some time later it was Christmas, I felt so happy at Christmas because Santa Claus brought me a Apple computer and a golf stick. A week after it was New Year, after the celebrating me, and my family played some games, such as BINGO and the gift thief; I stayed up awake until the 5:30 am when my mom told me that I had to go to sleep.
After that it came the "Feria de Manizales", the most exiting thing it could be: the bull fights or the lunch with the queens of the coffee. At the fist bull fight that I went was the Thursday when the bullfighters that participate where Diego Ventura, Alejandro Talavante and another one that I don't remember the name of it. In the other 3 bull fights that I wet the bullfighters that participate where Santiago Gomez, Santiago Naranjo, Enrique Ponce, Julian Lopez "El Juli", El Cid, Sebastian Castella etc. The part that I most enjoy from the queens of the coffee lunch was taking pictures with them, I took about 52 fotos with them. Finally 3 day ago I came back to school Colegio Granadino.
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The perfect school day
Common and Proper Nouns
BLUE PROPER
RED COOMON
The perfect day that could happened to me is this, it would be a Friday and it would be the day six. The first class that is Spanish we would see a movie and no homework from it, and also Francia would be nice and it would cancel the reading for the next week, the second class that it would be math we will have math madness and eat a lot of food and like in all math madness there will be no homework. At recess we will played basketball the students of middle school versus the high school students, we will played all recess and then Mr. Knous will com with Dr. Sims and the would ad to our team, with them in the team we won to high school students and I scored fifteen baskets. At third class that would be english we will se a movie that is really a good movie not one like "home" it would be one like impossible mission; and Ms. Bachelor will be a good person and cancel the tic-tac-toe for the next week and also the GrammarFlip.
After we will have computers, in it we would do a competition between the persons that did there house in Sketch Up, the third best would be Isabella Carvajal, the second one and the first one were tied between Sofia Camero and me we decide it would be a tied and each won twenty five thousand pesos. the lunch would be a really delicious and soft meat, banana cakes, and for drinks Milo and Mr. Tea, at science we will saw a twenty minute funny video and do a thirty minute lab about making a bicarbonate volcano; finally in theater we laugh a lot as we did a MATCH of improvisation where we laugh a lot of the groups as the theme was comedy, well finally I went home where I relax and play Play Station 4 until nine o'clock when I will go to dinner at a restaurant called "Vino y Pimienta" with my friends Juan Diego, Eduardo and Daniel Felipe.
what will happened if kids control the world
COMAS IN SERIES
I think that if kids ruled the world it would happened good and bad things. I think that some of the good are some things such as no more problems of the world contamination as the majority of kids protect the planet. Also I think that the cars would no work with petroleum it would work with renewable systems such as solar, water, wind, and bios. Another good thing is the the racism will disappear with other things such as corruption, preferences between boys and girls, and all types of bombs . Besides all kids would think that the boys and girls should be treated equally.
Well I already tell you some of the good things and now I will tell you some of the bad things. The school will be cancelled for the kids and the actual adults will have to go to school. The improves to the humanity only would happened only after the person that discovered is old as they go to school at the 35 years, the universities only accept people of 50 or more years, and the age you can get faster working is 53. The banks will disappeared as it would not exist finical money all will be digital. For poor people the school will be a problem as there will not be paper on school all will be digital (iPad, computer, tablet). Things like the notebooks, books, Terpel stations and other companies, and folders will disappear.
BLUE IS THE PARTS WHERE THE COMAS ARE APLY
What would happened if I could have a time machine
Proper Adjetives
Well the first thing that I would do is to travel to before the world war 2 and kill Hitler. After that I will go to 1500 to make the artist Leonardo Da Vinci to give me the Mona lisa. After that I would traveled to the best soccer player Pele´ time and ask him for and autograph. After that I would go to the best basketball player ever Michel Jordan basketball time and ask him for autograph my basketball ball. As I like a lot the golf tournaments I would go to the last masters ( golf tournament ) that was won by Jordan Spieth and ask him the ball and an autograph. Also Iwould go to the best laboratory of the future and invent a teletransportator and mix´s it with the time machine.
With the teletransportator I would go to italia as I love Italian food. Also go to Colombia's Juan Valdez time and drink a coffe as I love Colombian coffe. Also when I play golf I would go back to the start if I play bad. Also I dont always got 100 on the exams I would re do all the exams. Almost at the end of my trip I would go to USA and look for the recipe of the Universal Turkey leg as I love the Universal Studios Turkey leg. Finally I will got 1 year before to dont let that my grandmother died.
Proper Adjetives
Well the first thing that I would do is to travel to before the world war 2 and kill Hitler. After that I will go to 1500 to make the artist Leonardo Da Vinci to give me the Mona lisa. After that I would traveled to the best soccer player Pele´ time and ask him for and autograph. After that I would go to the best basketball player ever Michel Jordan basketball time and ask him for autograph my basketball ball. As I like a lot the golf tournaments I would go to the last masters ( golf tournament ) that was won by Jordan Spieth and ask him the ball and an autograph. Also Iwould go to the best laboratory of the future and invent a teletransportator and mix´s it with the time machine.
With the teletransportator I would go to italia as I love Italian food. Also go to Colombia's Juan Valdez time and drink a coffe as I love Colombian coffe. Also when I play golf I would go back to the start if I play bad. Also I dont always got 100 on the exams I would re do all the exams. Almost at the end of my trip I would go to USA and look for the recipe of the Universal Turkey leg as I love the Universal Studios Turkey leg. Finally I will got 1 year before to dont let that my grandmother died.
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What would happened if Animals could talk
Comas between two adjetives
Well as some persons think that animal really talk to us but we don´t understand them. For example when the cute, little puppy bark to us, they think he is saying something to us. Or when the furious, loud tiger roar it menas he is mad. I think that what would happened if animals talk would be that humans would never eat meat as there would be a rule of equality. Also the mental thinking from humans to animals would change from big, dangerous to big, safe.
I also think that lots of things of technology would´t be like there are as lots of things are accommodated to humans needs. Like the video games controls are accommodated to the humans hand it would had to change for a bear could use it. Finally I think that it would be great to talk to animal but I prefer my life as it is great, peaceful.
What would happened if Animals could talk
Comas between two adjetives
Well as some persons think that animal really talk to us but we don´t understand them. For example when the cute, little puppy bark to us, they think he is saying something to us. Or when the furious, loud tiger roar it menas he is mad. I think that what would happened if animals talk would be that humans would never eat meat as there would be a rule of equality. Also the mental thinking from humans to animals would change from big, dangerous to big, safe.
I also think that lots of things of technology would´t be like there are as lots of things are accommodated to humans needs. Like the video games controls are accommodated to the humans hand it would had to change for a bear could use it. Finally I think that it would be great to talk to animal but I prefer my life as it is great, peaceful.
What I would do if I was rich
Prepositions
Well the first thing that I would do is buying a big house in Miami beach and a BMW that I wold let the inside the silver garage of my house. Also I would buy a private jet that I would use it at any time that I want. I also buy the Buba Watson Golf car that can flote over water. After that I will pay for all Chelsea games tickets placed in first line. After having all that I would go to one of those pour countries like Niger and do a charity work donating lots of money for kids can study, can have medicine and food.
Also I would buy a big house to my parents and grandparents in Santa Marta, Bogota, Buenos Aires, Barcelona, Paris, London, and Miami Beach. One of the last things that I would do is go to the PGA Wasters of Augusta and see Jordan Spieth play. Finally I would save all the money in a bank account and put a automatic bank inside my house.
Prepositions
Well the first thing that I would do is buying a big house in Miami beach and a BMW that I wold let the inside the silver garage of my house. Also I would buy a private jet that I would use it at any time that I want. I also buy the Buba Watson Golf car that can flote over water. After that I will pay for all Chelsea games tickets placed in first line. After having all that I would go to one of those pour countries like Niger and do a charity work donating lots of money for kids can study, can have medicine and food.
Also I would buy a big house to my parents and grandparents in Santa Marta, Bogota, Buenos Aires, Barcelona, Paris, London, and Miami Beach. One of the last things that I would do is go to the PGA Wasters of Augusta and see Jordan Spieth play. Finally I would save all the money in a bank account and put a automatic bank inside my house.
The worst school day
Objects of prepositions
The worst school day would be a Monday, and a day 4. The first class that is science we would do a lab, but at the lab some people start playing with water and Ms. Stayner it kick out the complete class of all the labs in a complete month. After that we have a book inform in CS and the group in where I am was not really good and I got a bad grade. At reces some kids start playing with my ball and they punctured it, the ball was on the green table and they with a pencil punctured. After I have spanish we will have a 20 questions test about a really boring book.
Then I would have art, in where we would have a test about a famous artist and we had to put the exam on top of a really big table and I fall down. The lunch would be horrible. and as all day four I had math and english at last 2 hours, in math we would do a boring math lesson and in english we will do also a grammar lesson that would took all the class, the lesson is about objects of prepositions, on example of it is put the book on the chair.
Objects of prepositions
The worst school day would be a Monday, and a day 4. The first class that is science we would do a lab, but at the lab some people start playing with water and Ms. Stayner it kick out the complete class of all the labs in a complete month. After that we have a book inform in CS and the group in where I am was not really good and I got a bad grade. At reces some kids start playing with my ball and they punctured it, the ball was on the green table and they with a pencil punctured. After I have spanish we will have a 20 questions test about a really boring book.
Then I would have art, in where we would have a test about a famous artist and we had to put the exam on top of a really big table and I fall down. The lunch would be horrible. and as all day four I had math and english at last 2 hours, in math we would do a boring math lesson and in english we will do also a grammar lesson that would took all the class, the lesson is about objects of prepositions, on example of it is put the book on the chair.
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What I want to be when I grow up
Prepositional phrases
Well wen I grow up I want to be a doctor, mostly a plastic surgeon. I want to be a plastic surgeon because I want to help to organize the body of the people, like fix and move the deformed dirty nose of a person. Also I want to be that because I had listen that all plastic surgeon have a lot of money and they are needed at hospitals. Also I would have time to be with friends as they are not working all time as they are not need at all surgeries. But if I have a lot of money I would do another specialization in oncology as with that specialization I would won more money.
The oncology is base in work with the cancer, I would want to be oncologist as I want to help people to remove a malignant disease from they body. Finally I think that I would like to work in medicine, being a doctor or surgeon but want to work in medicine. As I like to help people I think that I would work really well on it because I like to move things, so I would like to move a illness that is killing the body of a person out.
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What would happened if I was a soldier
Simple, compound and complex sentences
COMPOUND, SIMPLE COMPLEX, COMPOUND AND COMPLEX
I would be really scared if was is a war and I would need to fight. But I, yes would be a soldier, because a the trains some of the groups soldiers have to jump and other groups have to jump. Also I would like to be a soldier, because I could get a high rang and win a lot of money because the bigger rang police are close to the prescient like the general Palomino. I would want be a person the defend the country, because I love my country and will not let somebody destroy it. I like a lot the movies of war or where the soldiers apere.
In my opinion the best thing of been a soldier are the trains because the general that is coordinating the train said things like "Rogers run faster and you Stevens jump for 20 more minutes" and things like that. Finally if I had to be a soldier I would be but if there is a war I will not go but if I can avoid it I prefer that.
What I want to be when I grow up
Prepositional phrases
Well wen I grow up I want to be a doctor, mostly a plastic surgeon. I want to be a plastic surgeon because I want to help to organize the body of the people, like fix and move the deformed dirty nose of a person. Also I want to be that because I had listen that all plastic surgeon have a lot of money and they are needed at hospitals. Also I would have time to be with friends as they are not working all time as they are not need at all surgeries. But if I have a lot of money I would do another specialization in oncology as with that specialization I would won more money.
The oncology is base in work with the cancer, I would want to be oncologist as I want to help people to remove a malignant disease from they body. Finally I think that I would like to work in medicine, being a doctor or surgeon but want to work in medicine. As I like to help people I think that I would work really well on it because I like to move things, so I would like to move a illness that is killing the body of a person out.
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What would happened if I was a soldier
Simple, compound and complex sentences
COMPOUND, SIMPLE COMPLEX, COMPOUND AND COMPLEX
I would be really scared if was is a war and I would need to fight. But I, yes would be a soldier, because a the trains some of the groups soldiers have to jump and other groups have to jump. Also I would like to be a soldier, because I could get a high rang and win a lot of money because the bigger rang police are close to the prescient like the general Palomino. I would want be a person the defend the country, because I love my country and will not let somebody destroy it. I like a lot the movies of war or where the soldiers apere.
In my opinion the best thing of been a soldier are the trains because the general that is coordinating the train said things like "Rogers run faster and you Stevens jump for 20 more minutes" and things like that. Finally if I had to be a soldier I would be but if there is a war I will not go but if I can avoid it I prefer that.